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Again, great job. I do have to say, I liked the first one better, just because I liked that song more than this one. But, It's still WAY BETTER than anything I can even imagine to do. You do the Protomen justice.
Now, bac to the Proto Forums for me!
Author's Response:
Haha, I've always been partial to Unrest myself. But this one will forever have a place in my heart, all over my hard-drive, and engrained into my roomate's brains, three frames at a time. And thanks! Seeya on the comm. ^.^
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Honestly, I didn't think it was as good as the first one. It would have been better if stuff was going on in the background,like in the first one. The music during the credits was cool, but the text for when Kirby was speaking went by too fast.
Still, pretty decent.
Author's Response:
Wow. I actually put the random background actions in because I wanted the first one to make a bit...more interesting because the rest was over all boring.
Well,the stuff Kirby says is not that important so I just made it fast.
Might think about doing some more background animation next time.
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A few things to change:
-Make a build-up for the taxi door, like what his life was, when he got into oragami, and stuff like that
-add some more sound, or change the sound quality-I know you talked about it in teh description, but, still.
- maybe a "(insert #here) years later" thing, and what his life is like, and credits (were their credits? I might have closed it too soon)
Author's Response:
I don't think I am going to add more of an opening.. but I already have added some music to the opening which I think will help.
And I AM going to add a sort of an epilogue
But ya, this may be kinda difficult but I DO want to add some like, telephone sounds and office murmuring as background noise
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